Whiz Kids

Whiz Kids

Wednesday 22 October 2014

Amazing Writers!

I have been so impressed with everyone's writing since they have come back from the holidays! This week we published our recounts from either the weekend or the holiday. It was a hard choice to find the best piece of writing to publish because they were all so great!
Two people in the class had such amazing writing I couldn't choose so they published both! Check out Jack and Indie's recounts. They have used lots of detail, descriptive adjectives, similes, direct speech, interesting punctuation and some humour. Wow!



17 comments:

  1. those storys are so amazing well done indie and Jack

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  2. those stores are lone as

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  3. your writing is very creative indanna and jack I also love it
    very much

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  4. indes writing is awesome I like it !

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  5. AMAZING writing room 4

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  6. AMAZING writing room4 it's AMAZING

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  7. FANTASTIC writing indie and jack

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  8. room4 loves you gise writing

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  9. WOW room4. great writing.

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  10. well done jack. r and indie

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  11. Indie i like your drawings !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! they are 100% cool

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