I have been so impressed with everyone's writing since they have come back from the holidays! This week we published our recounts from either the weekend or the holiday. It was a hard choice to find the best piece of writing to publish because they were all so great!
Two people in the class had such amazing writing I couldn't choose so they published both! Check out Jack and Indie's recounts. They have used lots of detail, descriptive adjectives, similes, direct speech, interesting punctuation and some humour. Wow!
those storys are so amazing well done indie and Jack
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Deleteyour writing is very creative indanna and jack I also love it
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indes writing is awesome I like it !
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ReplyDeleteFANTASTIC writing indie and jack
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ReplyDeleteIndie i like your drawings !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! they are 100% cool
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