We have been working hard in Room 4 to improve our writing by adding talking, description and lots of detail. We are really proud of our stories and all the effort we have put in to improving them! Our latest recounts are up on our Writing Wall in class and here are a few to share with you too.
well done to those who got there stories on the the the blog.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE ALL YOR WITING
ReplyDeleteI LOVE ALL YOR BIG STORYS ROOM4
ReplyDeleteI LOVE THOSE PEOPLE THAT HAVE THERE WRITING ON THE BLOG AND I HOPE THE OTHER PEOPLE DID A GREAT JOB TO
ReplyDeletegood job room 4
ReplyDeletel like the moves and photos too'.
ReplyDeletelove your writing guys
ReplyDeleteMAIA THAT WAS AWESOME.
ReplyDeleteTHAT IS AWESOME ROOM 4
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